tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post2296758484944142418..comments2024-02-22T07:47:22.661-05:00Comments on The Bathroom Monologues: Bathroom Haiku: UnevenJohn Wiswellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-32151445822179458442011-04-28T08:45:08.729-04:002011-04-28T08:45:08.729-04:00It's like picasso, but in words.It's like picasso, but in words.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-7427971344444587662011-04-27T20:53:12.755-04:002011-04-27T20:53:12.755-04:00Beautiful, John.Beautiful, John.Danielle La Pagliahttp://www.daniellelapaglia.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-46798112244499922792011-04-27T16:09:21.185-04:002011-04-27T16:09:21.185-04:00@ Max - Wouldn't it be more logical to say tha...@ Max - Wouldn't it be more logical to say that the imagery depicted is simply an unanticipated sum? Assuming we've got our metaphors straight.<br /><br />@ John - <br /><br />A dream of flight<br />ends<br />in a pool of urine.metaghosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18301191638894756414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-2025904084464325152011-04-27T13:50:46.268-04:002011-04-27T13:50:46.268-04:00Thanks you two! I rarely compose any form of poetr...Thanks you two! I rarely compose any form of poetry, but the occasional haiku strikes. I'm glad folks enjoy it.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-38535273151596320022011-04-27T12:50:47.177-04:002011-04-27T12:50:47.177-04:00I like this a lot. It depicts imagery far greater...I like this a lot. It depicts imagery far greater than the sum of the words themselves.Max Cantorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00162681176688582120noreply@blogger.com