tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post4991277876642123323..comments2024-02-22T07:47:22.661-05:00Comments on The Bathroom Monologues: The Succubus ArgumentJohn Wiswellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-85055539792563584212013-08-26T14:42:13.471-04:002013-08-26T14:42:13.471-04:00When I'm ready to go, I'm willing to go th...When I'm ready to go, I'm willing to go that way!Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-65022117920630350242013-08-25T18:16:19.734-04:002013-08-25T18:16:19.734-04:00Hmmmm, is it a bad thing that what she says makes ...Hmmmm, is it a bad thing that what she says makes perfect sense to me? *shiver*Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-89647891174412662792013-08-24T11:12:01.889-04:002013-08-24T11:12:01.889-04:00Something very sinister about this level of pleadi...Something very sinister about this level of pleading!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-61225069855612006792013-08-23T23:14:26.220-04:002013-08-23T23:14:26.220-04:00This is my favorite part, "Modernity has jack...This is my favorite part, "Modernity has jacked up some suicide rates. Poor little guys throwing away food – my food. My food with shattered little feelings that deserve nursing." It cracked me up that the succubus would have such selfish reasons to care about suicide. Very succubus-ish. My only real knowledge of them is from that show Lost Girl. Great show. And great piece, John. Keep on rockin'!Shell Flowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08127004188099765270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-55391151922647621662013-08-23T14:28:44.080-04:002013-08-23T14:28:44.080-04:00My favorite line is "We're sweet dreams, ...My favorite line is "We're sweet dreams, the cure to suicide and ennui, and the very best of homicide." Sooo deliciously evil. I feel a lot of angst and resentment in this character. She must enjoy taking it out on her victims.<br /><br />If you're looking for nit-picks, I think "finger-licking" should be hyphenated, and don't you mean "in ecstasy"? <br /><br />Margit Sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10598857001911420397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-63901978298784214542013-08-23T13:21:15.902-04:002013-08-23T13:21:15.902-04:00"All the licorice strings of your insecuritie..."All the licorice strings of your insecurities, the robust stew of life experience, and just a sprig of prudential nervousness."<br />Best. Line. EVER! You made serious neuroses sound like a menu at a family restuarant!<br />Hysterical, totally made my day.Bevimushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-81002006412586042322013-08-23T11:06:36.011-04:002013-08-23T11:06:36.011-04:00Glad this voice is clicking for people. It sure wa...Glad this voice is clicking for people. It sure was evilly fun to write.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-85956491778610393232013-08-23T11:05:23.702-04:002013-08-23T11:05:23.702-04:00That's a fair question. Do I give the Patriarc...That's a fair question. Do I give the Patriarchy Monsters a rebuttal?John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-62944318230017412462013-08-23T11:04:53.044-04:002013-08-23T11:04:53.044-04:00Succubus!Succubus!John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-88447606724044303962013-08-23T11:04:36.014-04:002013-08-23T11:04:36.014-04:00Thanks, Celeste! It was a line I couldn't help...Thanks, Celeste! It was a line I couldn't help including.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-25577545466651783512013-08-23T10:18:16.110-04:002013-08-23T10:18:16.110-04:00Hey now, I like vampires. ;)
That last line is gre...Hey now, I like vampires. ;)<br />That last line is great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-2953982499524106762013-08-23T09:25:59.414-04:002013-08-23T09:25:59.414-04:00Sounds strangely persuasive to me.
Good one, John...Sounds strangely persuasive to me.<br /><br />Good one, John, especially the last line.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-3500917920414405212013-08-23T07:56:34.697-04:002013-08-23T07:56:34.697-04:00" a front to treat you like a juice box with ..." a front to treat you like a juice box with two straws in the neck." terrific description John! And great last line to sum it all up.Deanna Schrayerhttp://deannaschrayer.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-27361695172370260132013-08-23T07:43:50.685-04:002013-08-23T07:43:50.685-04:00Screwed to death. Sounds tempting...Screwed to death. Sounds tempting...Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-59897496433627198552013-08-23T01:58:56.924-04:002013-08-23T01:58:56.924-04:00Hmm the mention of liquorice made me hungry ^_^Hmm the mention of liquorice made me hungry ^_^Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-27682259972821701312013-08-23T01:46:16.719-04:002013-08-23T01:46:16.719-04:00Oh my. Put like that it is almost an obligation t...Oh my. Put like that it is almost an obligation to put the licorice strings of my insecurities away.<br />Now do the incubi get a response? Or are the succubae right?Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-3498064430298356742013-08-23T01:42:08.127-04:002013-08-23T01:42:08.127-04:00"All the licorice strings of your insecuritie..."All the licorice strings of your insecurities" is pretty much the awesomest phrase I've read in forever. Celestehttp://www.runningnekkid.com/noreply@blogger.com