tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post2597183205466084929..comments2024-02-22T07:47:22.661-05:00Comments on The Bathroom Monologues: Bathroom Monologue: Almost CleverJohn Wiswellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-82345273489246048892012-04-01T18:20:45.733-04:002012-04-01T18:20:45.733-04:00What a great piece in such a small number of words...What a great piece in such a small number of words - nice one Wiswell. Poor Abnar, he did seem clever, but being academic doesn't automatically mean you have much common sense - something I often come acrossAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-88404250693594344982012-03-31T10:23:47.194-04:002012-03-31T10:23:47.194-04:00He must have REALLY pissed off the syndicate if th...He must have REALLY pissed off the syndicate if they took out an entire apartment complex for him.<br /><br />Compact with a great last line. Good stuff as usual.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16518183823230864763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-66823595562958699352012-03-31T06:23:52.504-04:002012-03-31T06:23:52.504-04:00Oh well, at least the poor guy won't be worryi...Oh well, at least the poor guy won't be worrying about the syndicate being after him any more. :)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-62607176768848501542012-03-30T21:38:18.880-04:002012-03-30T21:38:18.880-04:00ah, poor abner. funny in a three stooges kind of w...ah, poor abner. funny in a three stooges kind of way. peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-36042039294796661892012-03-30T16:12:54.578-04:002012-03-30T16:12:54.578-04:00On the bright side, surely he could've felt a ...On the bright side, surely he could've felt a lot worse just before his death. On the not so bright side, he's dead.liminalfictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08762010680878316253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-20892385948734485642012-03-30T13:36:45.184-04:002012-03-30T13:36:45.184-04:00Media reports blame the explosion on gas leak. I s...Media reports blame the explosion on gas leak. I suspect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-9952104226901655292012-03-30T12:56:46.871-04:002012-03-30T12:56:46.871-04:00Poor guy. Just when he thought he was safe, he goe...Poor guy. Just when he thought he was safe, he goes boom.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-7398129848492089212012-03-30T12:46:05.223-04:002012-03-30T12:46:05.223-04:00I hope that when I die I feel almost clever!
Nice...I hope that when I die I feel almost clever!<br /><br />Nice one.Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-60471952177467450662012-03-30T11:56:51.729-04:002012-03-30T11:56:51.729-04:00Superior firepower is always a good thing.Superior firepower is always a good thing.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-88259524280542593912012-03-30T08:29:54.281-04:002012-03-30T08:29:54.281-04:00Poor Abner!Poor Abner!Karen Wojcik Bernerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12824421839546160653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-83464850076063590962012-03-30T07:54:52.235-04:002012-03-30T07:54:52.235-04:00Wonderfully compact tale here — "he died feel...Wonderfully compact tale here — "he died feeling almost clever." Indeed. Not one for planning ahead much, was this Abner. Especially when dealing with people who think nothing of using a cannon to kill a fly. :-PLarry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-55857269186819121772012-03-30T04:54:57.651-04:002012-03-30T04:54:57.651-04:00Oh, Abner. At least you gave him peace of mind!Oh, Abner. At least you gave him peace of mind!Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-72342951717060182662012-03-30T04:33:48.186-04:002012-03-30T04:33:48.186-04:00he died feeling almost clever.. great line.. but y...he died feeling almost clever.. great line.. but you have to feel sorry for this idiot..Tom Gillespiehttp://www.tom-gillespie.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-69689637753939495522012-03-30T03:14:24.945-04:002012-03-30T03:14:24.945-04:00With the title and the attention paid to the front...With the title and the attention paid to the front door I felt sure he was going to have left the back door open. Of course, being a flat, there probably wasn't a back door.<br /><br />The bomb felt a little cheap, for me, but I guess satisfying me is hardly one of the syndicate's major concerns... ;)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-52870076821121563922012-03-30T02:16:31.231-04:002012-03-30T02:16:31.231-04:00Oh lets should read least - damn this keyboard - i...Oh lets should read least - damn this keyboard - it's its fault not mine - truly! ;0Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-48690508133979913122012-03-30T02:15:42.729-04:002012-03-30T02:15:42.729-04:00Poor Abner, just when he thought he was safe.. - l...Poor Abner, just when he thought he was safe.. - lets he went out with a bang! ^_^Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-80053332862941135752012-03-30T02:06:32.565-04:002012-03-30T02:06:32.565-04:00You have to feel sorry for poor Abner. All that tr...You have to feel sorry for poor Abner. All that trouble and he forgot to check under the sofa.Your story plays like a cartoon farce. I'm thinking Itchy and Scratchy at speed. Wah, wah, waaaah.....Justin Davieshttp://flyingscribbler.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3337042377966398742.post-80303390844641291852012-03-30T01:39:25.991-04:002012-03-30T01:39:25.991-04:00Abner seems the type that would take a knife to a ...Abner seems the type that would take a knife to a gunfight.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.com