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Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Bathroom Haiku: Uneven


symmetrical masks
shot at angles, from outside
we look uneven
at

5 comments:

  1. Max CantorApril 27, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    I like this a lot. It depicts imagery far greater than the sum of the words themselves.

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  2. John WiswellApril 27, 2011 at 1:50 PM

    Thanks you two! I rarely compose any form of poetry, but the occasional haiku strikes. I'm glad folks enjoy it.

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  3. metaghostApril 27, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    @ Max - Wouldn't it be more logical to say that the imagery depicted is simply an unanticipated sum? Assuming we've got our metaphors straight.

    @ John -

    A dream of flight
    ends
    in a pool of urine.

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  4. Danielle La PagliaApril 27, 2011 at 8:53 PM

    Beautiful, John.

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  5. LauritaApril 28, 2011 at 8:45 AM

    It's like picasso, but in words.

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