Day Two of Three from the ChiCon 7 diary. Tomorrow I want to
touch on disability issues at the hotel, the Hugo Awards, and seeing Saturn for
the first time. Today is devoted to the public readings and private writings
that go on at these sorts of conventions.
THE READINGS
I went to my share of readings over the weekend, and saw
some very talented writers. The one that rocked me back in my chair was Mary Robinette
Kowal, sharing “Locked In” from
Apex, at the Broad Reading meeting. It’s a
piece of flash fiction that captures Science Fiction, Horror, Tragedy and the
Medical Thriller without succumbing to nearly any niche’s expectations, and
it’s a great reminder of why Apex Magazine is a top resource in the industry.
I managed to make a total ass out of myself afterward by congratulating
Kowal on that story and not realizing she was the same
Mary Robinette Kowal up
for a Hugo for the superb “For Want of a Nail.” It’s great when you realize the two people
you’re a fan of are the same person. Not so great when you realize you're an idiot.
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This is not two people.
Some people have a harder time learning this than others. |
Broad Reading
was a neat setup, housing over a dozen quick readings from individual members
in an all-female writing group of all levels of expertise. Most official
readings were for one person. Jo Walton, who won the Hugo for her touching tale
of adolescence in
Among Others, read
from her work in progress about teens in space who want to party on the ship
forever instead of land. George R.R. Martin’s reading room couldn’t have been
packed any more hopelessly if he’d written it.
Friend and fellow #fridayflasher
Emma Newman showed the
chops she’s honed recording audiobooks in a fine reading from her short story
collection and the upcoming
Split Worlds.
Probably the highlight for all readings for me was when she read of a curse
being cast on our hero, and somewhere outside our walls, a pneumatic hiss went
off and filled the room. You couldn’t pay for better publicity than that,
though the hotel should check that elevator.
There’s a lot you can learn from a reading, even a bad one.
Maybe especially a bad one, because you can study how authors psych themselves
out. One author, who I won’t name, kept stumbling over her excerpt. At first I
felt bad, but then I started constructing narration in my own head, and realized
her errors were highlighting how strong the voice would be on the printed page.
It was kind of uncanny, and reaffirmed a couple of things I suspect about how
plot progression works. One of my recent hobbies is listening to readings or
audiobooks and testing how it would sound in my head, as opposed to how it’s
intended.
THE WORKSHOPS
These are an institution at WorldCons, and will hopefully be
for the foreseeable future. Oz Drummond and Lou Berger organized at least
eighteen different groups of three aspiring authors (“victims” is the official
unofficial name). These trios were joined with two professionally published authors,
forming critique groups of five, to hone the victims’ craft. I had the pleasure
of working with Martha Wells and Gregory Wilson, who treated all three of us
with total professionalism and consideration.
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| Typical writer reaction in workshops. |
Our session lasted two hours, and
we spent about forty on every victim, myself included. Your mileage will vary,
but we were all serious about craft and I don’t think a minute was wasted. This workshop was a big test for my thoroughly peer-read The House
That Nobody Built, as I thought it was near publishable an wanted to see
how it would stand up to scrutiny. I left jubilant, having retained more of the
positive feedback than the negative. But just as important, the negative
feedback was all reasonable, like the desire for a few details, or how to
streamline the synopsis. Reasonable, and addressable in just a few minutes of
word processing.
So it was the positives I lingered on, which is rare for me.
One of my pros asked if I’d already queried it, seeming to think it was ready.
One of my pros also described it with what I wish to God will be a cover blurb:
“This is like Dungeons & Dragons, except awesome!”
There were some other developments at the convention I
can’t speak on yet, but cross your fingers for me. I’m doing everything I can
with what luck I get. I can’t praise these workshops enough, if you have the
fortune of attending a convention that runs anything like it. If I turn “pro,”
I’d be happy to help operate one.
