Friday, August 17, 2012

Bathroom Monologue: Zhanjee Vs. The Dactyls


No sooner were the Greater Sauropods pacified, then the Dactyls emerged. Previously Tyrannosaurs had frightened them from hunting the plains; now, without the king lizards, the winged beasts descended. They roamed in flocks, each able to carry off a bison or hogbear for its lunch. They possessed ceaseless hunger and soon ravaged Frontier farms and set about eating Munenori platoons.

Zhanjee the Butcher was already in the Old Valleys for the incursions against the Sauropods, and so he intervened. He climbed to the tallest peaks to observe. The Dactyls nested low rather than high, cherishing water sources. Above human or khimeric flesh, they loved the fat of the Cloud Seals who played along the high waterfalls. Whenever a Cloud Seal would dive from a waterfall, a Dactyl would swoop in to snap her up.

Zhanjee waited atop the most popular waterfall. He watched as one Cloud Seal dove, and a young Dactyl struck. He watched as a second pup dove, and was similarly struck. He bided his time until all the young had Cloud Seals, and it was only the mother who remained hungry in the skies. Then he flung himself off the falls.

When her jaws attempt to catch him, he jammed the great Deviltongue between them and propped them open. Sheathed as not to slay the beast, he rested the endcap into the soft flesh of her lower mouth, digging it deeper whenever she resisted his steering. Then he mounted her neck and forced her to ground her young. Within the evening, he became the first human to break and teach a Dactyl mount.

It was ironic that he seldom rode them, preferring the company of horse or bison. Yet the Munenori army was eternally grateful for the gift of war from the sky.

10 comments:

  1. Wow. This took me in unexpected directions. Thank you.

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  2. I felt the same as the person above - took me into a different time zone. Well done

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  3. This is so very visual John, I could easily see - and feel - the fight. Excellent!

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  4. Remind me not to mess with Zhanjee! I liked the detail about his Deviltongue being sheathed.

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  5. I couldn't help but imagine the mother catching on to Zhanjee's ruse and not swooping in. The he'd just be a guy diving off a waterfall.

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  6. This was a nice piece of visual writing John. You managed to take the reader with you to the top of that waterfall.

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  7. Great story. Reminds me very much of the Banshee-taming in Avatar.

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  8. Cloud Seals! I just can't... compose myself! Brilliant story.

    I absolutely loved the visuals John. You just inspired me to write something. Thank you!

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  9. Aw but all the poor Cloud Seals! Still, can't help thinking a Dactyl mount would be a better way to get around than public transport.

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