I’ve been tagged by Adam Byatt and Danielle La Paglia to share a snippet from my
work in progress. Here’s the deal: you’re supposed to search through your
document for the word “look,” and then share the surrounding paragraph. I
presume you go with the first occurrence of “look;” I got lucky with mine. Then
we tag a few authors to get them do the same.
So here is a first look inside The Last House in the Sky, introducing one of our heroes:
"He was too naked.
There were men who were simply not built for nudity, and this was one of them,
with his long, rat-nested hair, and his paunch, and the way his hips leaned a
little too far forward such that even if he put trousers on he’d still look indecent.
A black cat pawed its way around his shoulders and messy mane."
I'd like to pass this on to:
Linda Wastilla
Tony Noland
Emma Newman
Linda Wastilla
Laura Eno
Tom Gillespie
I'd like to pass this on to:
Linda Wastilla
Tony Noland
Emma Newman
Linda Wastilla
Laura Eno
Tom Gillespie
I'm liking the snippet John. A fine example of manhood. I also like the word count for 'The Last House in the Sky'.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Callie! The word count is growing, though I am about to go on a trip that will delay it some. Should be on target for 90,000 at the end of the business in September.
DeleteFrom your description I agree he should keep his clothes on! ^_^
ReplyDeleteI promise he gets dressed after he's arrested.
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