Thursday, October 22, 2009

Bathroom Monologue: An Eye, a Finger

Pa shook his head, holding the ice pack around Billy's face.

"It's all fun and games until somebody loses an eye."

Rob stamped his feet and scowled at them all, holding the rag around his hand.

"Why doesn't anybody care about me? Losing a finger sucks, too! Everybody likes Billy better."

Their mother sighed and drove faster.

3 comments:

  1. I guess everything's relative. Nice micro-vignette too.

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  2. I'm glad you both liked it! We all need a little dismemberment leading up to Halloween.

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