Monday, February 14, 2011

Bathroom Monologue: At Our Best

He set aside his entire evening. He spent half a month's salary on bribes to get them a table at the city's most exclusive restaurant. He bought her the best chocolates. He found her favorite wine, in its best year. Nervous, he showered three times and used that cologne he couldn't stand, but that she said reminded her of the ocean. She loved the ocean. So he made sure that their table overlooked it. He had his best suit dry-cleaned and held off wearing it for a month, saving it just for that night. He wore the tie she'd gotten him last year. He got a dozen black roses, and put them in a bouquet with a dozen white ones. In the very center, he placed a single, brilliant red rose. That bouquet sat on the middle of their table for two hours as he waited for her. She never came. At the stroke of ten, he looked out at the night city skyline. His jaw fell as he realized. He'd forgotten to invite her.

8 comments:

  1. Now that was a killer story about a man obsessed...nice.

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  2. Ha! What a brilliant finishing line. Poor guy. It's hard to keep track of everything.

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  3. Ehh, sounds like something I would do... :(

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  4. John this is great. First I laughed (and scared my dog) then I felt sorry for the guy.

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