Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Bathroom Haiku: Uneven


symmetrical masks
shot at angles, from outside
we look uneven

6 comments:

  1. I like this a lot. It depicts imagery far greater than the sum of the words themselves.

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  2. Thanks you two! I rarely compose any form of poetry, but the occasional haiku strikes. I'm glad folks enjoy it.

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  3. @ Max - Wouldn't it be more logical to say that the imagery depicted is simply an unanticipated sum? Assuming we've got our metaphors straight.

    @ John -

    A dream of flight
    ends
    in a pool of urine.

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  4. It's like picasso, but in words.

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